Score: 3

"Cars are pretty stale."

submission: zjpaymkleyqozmbdlh

date: July 5, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
Explosions are very important. They keep the audience's attention aroused. The placement of the title was actually original, I liked how it was on the rooftop. You should use that technique in any future flash animations.

{SUGGESTIONS}
There wasn't any change of perspective, it was just aerial. That can get pretty boring. It was way to short. But if you plan on making it longer, don't make it boring or your audience will just X out of the window.

Overall, a regular beginner's animation. Needs improvement.

Score: 0

"YouTube Material"

submission: Mario Paint Nirvana

date: July 5, 2008

This doesn't belong here, Newgrounds is for flash animation. The only times videos belong here is when they are very well made (an example would be AfroNinja's two videos he has on here). Or when you are contributing to a current Newgrounds fad (like my JEM video). And if you stole this, then that's just sad.

Score: 1

"no."

submission: Build a caterpillar v1.5

date: July 5, 2008

(COMPLIMENTS)
The next/previous buttons where nice.

{SUGGESTIONS}
The game's art is very un-inspired, as I could have just pulled out a sheet of paper and drawn that caterpillar and colored it in under a minute. Next time, take your time when drawing something and make a background that isn't blank. Also:

- No icon (I'm making one for this game, though.)
- The mad face in the author's comments has a backwards eyebrow.

Score: 0

"shame shame shame =^_^="

submission: Final Crisis (no guitar)

date: March 31, 2008

Samples don't cut it as an original track. No work = no stars.

Score: 10

"Mastery! =^_^="

submission: Fairuzons - The Final Stage

date: March 31, 2008

The start really fills you with wonder of what lies ahead, the bells seem to call you forward to the challenge ahead, it almost reminds me of the Pokemon league. So I see why this is called "Final Stage". Very good and original!

Score: 6

"=^_^="

submission: tetris weird remix

date: March 31, 2008

It's OK for a base to a larger song, since it's just trumpets and a beat. Could use a little more substance. Maybe building on this would give you a more successful product.

On a side note, learn how to take criticism. I'm trying to help you with suggestions and you tell me to shut up. This is exactly what reviews are for. Not very artist like of you, "Mr. I'm Tough On The Internets".