Score: 3

"Cars are pretty stale."

submission: zjpaymkleyqozmbdlh

date: July 5, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
Explosions are very important. They keep the audience's attention aroused. The placement of the title was actually original, I liked how it was on the rooftop. You should use that technique in any future flash animations.

{SUGGESTIONS}
There wasn't any change of perspective, it was just aerial. That can get pretty boring. It was way to short. But if you plan on making it longer, don't make it boring or your audience will just X out of the window.

Overall, a regular beginner's animation. Needs improvement.

Score: 0

"YouTube Material"

submission: Mario Paint Nirvana

date: July 5, 2008

This doesn't belong here, Newgrounds is for flash animation. The only times videos belong here is when they are very well made (an example would be AfroNinja's two videos he has on here). Or when you are contributing to a current Newgrounds fad (like my JEM video). And if you stole this, then that's just sad.

Score: 1

"no."

submission: Build a caterpillar v1.5

date: July 5, 2008

(COMPLIMENTS)
The next/previous buttons where nice.

{SUGGESTIONS}
The game's art is very un-inspired, as I could have just pulled out a sheet of paper and drawn that caterpillar and colored it in under a minute. Next time, take your time when drawing something and make a background that isn't blank. Also:

- No icon (I'm making one for this game, though.)
- The mad face in the author's comments has a backwards eyebrow.

Score: 1

"no."

submission: DBZ 9000 hit combo

date: July 5, 2008

(COMPLIMENTS)
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[SUGGESTIONS}
There are a very large list of things that where missing from this movie that would have greatly increased the quality of it. (i.e.) voice acting or organized subtitles, well constructed characters (yes, even stick figures can be done wrong) etc.

The only dialogue that was present was not well thought out and cliché (not to mention downright cheesy)

Please make something more original. There are over 9000 stick figure DBZ movies already on Newgrounds.

Try again, but take your time to fine-tune it.

Score: 9

"right then..."

submission: How 2 Succeed on NG pt.2

date: July 1, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
I like how you went through most of the problems that have been plaguing recent front-page flash movies. And you did it in an orderly fashion witch is ascetically pleasing. The art was good. The final tip was probably the most important. :)

{SUGGESTIONS}
You could have animated a few parts a little more. Details are good in animation as well as art.

Now to address another concern. I noticed that you added a "cat beanie" to your outline of a typical loser. I couldn't help but feel that this was directed specifically to me. :3

Score: 10

"WIN. WIN ON MANY LEVELS."

submission: Skittles N' Dickz

date: May 14, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
It's always good to see parodies of overrated series here on NG. There was less quality voice acting then in that other awesome parody, Skittles N' Shitz, but I still find this to be superior because of the quantity of time spent taking it to the extreme and pointing out that Skittles N' Bitz was only "FALL DOWN, COCK JOKE, FART, RAPE, EXPLOSION, COCK JOKE". Even though I'm not a fan of sprite movies, this still was entertaining as hell and I laughed hard at times. Nice quantity AND quality in the segments, nicely put together, too. Mission accomplished. Oh, and if there's ever a sequel parody then count me in.

Score: 8

"YOU COPIED MY GLASSES!"

submission: do u have anal disease?

date: April 22, 2008

[COMPLIMENTS]
Nice choice of BG music, and pretty good character movement.

{SUGGESTIONS}
Try expanding the plot a little. You'll get a higher score if you compile more story into one flash. Also try making your characters different, they look like you just swapped colors.

OVERALL:
Really good for a first submission!

Score: 10

"out of the ordinary"

submission: Link's Prize

date: April 22, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
Nice FBF animation, glad it wasn't a generic VG movie. The art was very pretty, good job taking your time on it. It wasn't what I was expecting plot-wise but still is different enough to be considered good material. Good use of sound effects and angles. Also nice how Link and the background were different art-wise.

(OVERALL)
Very nice animation.

Score: 10

"oh so beautiful"

submission: Charlie the Unicorn 2

date: April 15, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
Very random, but in a good way. Not the unfunny 13-year old kind, but the truly funny kind. Even though I saw the ending coming, it didn't take away from the movie at all. :)

[SUGGESTIONS]
I'd have to suggest to work on the walking animation, unless you where going for a kind of "South Park-paper bobbing up and down" feel.

{OVERALL}
A worthy sequel!

Score: 8

"and the mob wanted in..."

submission: Little Tortilla Boy.

date: April 9, 2008

{COMPLIMENTS}
Ha ha! I love Pablo Fancisco! This was pretty good for two and a half hours.

[SUGGESTIONS]
The zooming text went off-screen, you might want to fix that. Other than that, you could have used more mouth positions when lip-syncing.

OVERALL:
Pretty well done. Room for improvement, of course.